Owwch! What was that? As I looked down at the sand that was as soft, golden and silky as the steaming hot sun, I found a mysterious bottle of doom that had a message inside it. I quickly picked it up and zoomed into the bushes. POP! The cork came off and out came a ghost. The ghost whispered to me, ''tonight when the sun goes down, I shall take your soul and have it for myself. Now take this note, read it and do not show it to anyone''.
I read the note and all it said was BEWARE! I scrunched up the note and threw it away. Pooph!
Swish! The ghost was suddenly back in the bottle. I threw the bottle into the water that was as blue as a clear sky, so the ghost couldn't take my soul and it was unable to take it. No one ever saw the mysterious bottle of doom again.
10 comments:
Great story Belle, pretty scary :)
Great describing words Belle - Hope I don't come across a mysterious bottle of doom argghhhhh....
You use words well to paint a wonderful picture!
Very scary, so pleased you threw it back into the water.
very cool balle
good job Belle
Great story Belle
I relly good belle
I relly good belle
I like your thats my story bell.
I like your thats my story bell.
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