On a sunny morning a polar bear was sun bathing on a drifting barrel in the middle of the sea. Suddenly he lifted his head lazily and rolled off the barrel and polar-paddled his way to the deserted boat and flipped into the boat and walked. Almost suddenly he tripped on a coil of rope and his foot turned the lever on and he was surprised he was moving without polar-paddling. Suddenly he waddled to the side of the boat and saw an island. He took hold of the steering wheel and steered it around the rocks and he fell out of the boat and skied from the coil of rope. When he was skiing he was leaning back like he was pulling the brake of a train however his feet were in the water getting soaked. That bear was so excited that he jumped some rocks and disaster struck. All of a sudden he landed head first on the mini deserted island. Kplonk! "Ouch," he cried as the boat fell on his head like a car crusher. I should have stayed at home today! he whispered to himself.
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Connor
3 comments:
I love the idea of a water skiing polar bear, Connor!
This would make a good cartoon.
Connor - that story is lots of fun and I had a lovely image of the polar bear floating in the ocean relaxing before his adventure with the boat. Beautifully descriptive and well written. I especially loved the bit at the end where he contemplatively whispers that he should have stayed at home today. Julie
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