"Wow! Today is a wonderful sunset isn't it mum?"
"It sure is ."
"Mum can we go on the pier now?"
"Go for it."
"Ok come on mum."
"I'm coming. I'm coming."
Quick the sunset's almost finished . Hurry!"
" Come on we're almost there ."
"NO NO! Oh no we missed it."
" Come on, we'll come back tomorrow ."
"We'd better."
Tomorrow arrived.
"Yes we got here! That's a great sunset.
4 comments:
Oh Ryan that was such a great story - well done. I went to the pier last Friday to see the full moon in the sky - it was very big and the lights were on under the pier.. I had to keep very still when I took the picture, but it came out well.
I like the way you said 'Tomorrow arrives'.
That's such a cool story.I want to go to the pier now.
That is great writing. Good words.
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